Movement is smooth but doesn’t emphasis any theme.
Font choice has originality but stylizing has weaknesses. See the overlaps between letters, especially “T-I” of Austin. You can see the “T” coming through the dot of the “I.” Use fills or other fonts.
I don’t see any emphasis on the Alphabet theme. The cities line up in order but without knowing the context of the assignment, I could easily miss the Alphabetical theme.
I don’t know if it’s good or bad but the red fill in reminds me of the 007 intro thing where Pierce Brosnan shoots at the camera and blood drips.
Movement is smooth but doesn’t emphasis any theme.
Font choice has originality but stylizing has weaknesses. See the overlaps between letters, especially “T-I” of Austin. You can see the “T” coming through the dot of the “I.” Use fills or other fonts.
I don’t see any emphasis on the Alphabet theme. The cities line up in order but without knowing the context of the assignment, I could easily miss the Alphabetical theme.
I don’t know if it’s good or bad but the red fill in reminds me of the 007 intro thing where Pierce Brosnan shoots at the camera and blood drips.