My book prototype functions well and all my flaps successfully transition from page to page to reveal the change in scenery underneath and the poems behind the flaps associated with the change in sky. I like how the skies and foregrounds contrast through the distinction produced from the horizon lines. I would probably like to add backgrounds to the poem pages to add a greater atmospherical sequential effect. I think I will want to add more pages and a fold out to the book depicting more times of the day, but I am happy with the current amount. Overall the book could have a more cohesive flow that can be done through a better use of space, but I think that the conceptual aspects of the contrasting chronological sequence functions well.
