I really loved the way this was written. I struggle with telling a story haha, so this was told in a way that was exciting and helped me think about the next time I write a story. I have never seen a story using storify, real cool!
I loved your intro. I really felt your surroundings from your story from the sounds and sights you were experiencing. I don’t really know if I have any corrections or ideas for you…I personally thought it was well-written. If anything I wanted to hear more about the place. Your story made me want to look into this more that’s for sure!
November 16, 2016 at 12:53 am
Nice story. I’m emailing you a note with some corrections for the edit. You need one more source.
November 17, 2016 at 2:33 am
I really loved the way this was written. I struggle with telling a story haha, so this was told in a way that was exciting and helped me think about the next time I write a story. I have never seen a story using storify, real cool!
I loved your intro. I really felt your surroundings from your story from the sounds and sights you were experiencing. I don’t really know if I have any corrections or ideas for you…I personally thought it was well-written. If anything I wanted to hear more about the place. Your story made me want to look into this more that’s for sure!