Dec
2015
VISU 1100: Blog Post #5
Part 1: Upload 2 images of current classwork: a project(s) you are currently working on or have completed from one of your studio/visual studies courses.
- What was the goal of the assignment? Or what was the question posed by this assignment?
- How did you go about reaching this goal or answering this question?
A. My first image is a collage I created for VISU 1311. The question I had to “answer” was “how do you “take” an image? Harmony: layering and building meaning. I’m not quite sure if I even answered the question. I’m not sure how I created this and even questioned if this was a collage because I don’t understand them.
B. My second image is a work in progress for my Drawing I final. I had to create and image that was conceptual and observational. So what I did was I took my nice porcelain teapot and tea cup and moved objects in the background and changed the way the image looked on the cup.
Part 2: Self-Critique: On your blog, answer the following questions about one project you are currently working on or have completed from one of your studio/visual studies courses (see Part 1 of Blog post #3).
- What is the strongest aspect of this work?
- I think my strongest work on the collage is the fact that one can get lost in the image.
- For my second piece I really enjoy the reflection that is shown under where a glass surface is supposed to be.
- What is the weakest aspect?
- I feel my weakest aspect on the first piece is color. It’s all very dark, even though there is a yellowish or gold color. The color kind of feels muted.
- My weakest for the ink piece is the sloppiness on the actual paper. You can’t see it that well in this image, but the page is really messy looking because I would forget that the ink was still wet in some places and it would be smudged.
- How can the composition or form be improved?
- Though I feel that the colors are slightly muted I feel that if I lightened them up it would make the image look kind of strange. I feel like they work together even I feel like there is something wrong with it.
- I could have practiced more if I had time and made sure that I could do this and would be completely confident in my skills.
- How can the project be strengthened conceptually?
- Maybe I could have created designs rather than just over lapping the image.
- I like this image the way it is. But I guess I could move some objects or add some objects to make it look less symmetrical.
- How can the project be strengthened technically?
- I am not sure how to technically strengthen the collage piece
- I could have used a different medium that I know better. But I enjoy this challenge
- Additional notes.