‘Foster Child’ is an amazing poem written by Dorianne Laux in The Book Of Men. I chose this specific poem because of the way Dorianne Laux is able to take specific events and let the reader be fully encompassed in what is happening. I focused on her imagery in this poem. She is able to explain the young man, a foster child, and the incident that occurred with great detail and in just a few lines.
I sat down with an 11th grader and showed him this poem. He was a little overwhelmed by the poem. “It’s great, just hard to wrap your head around.” Although he was a little hesitant with the poem, after talking about the imagery and what it does for the poem, he was impressed by what the author was able to do with such few words. “She takes us through the event and we are there.” One specific line that he really enjoyed:
“all I saw
was the fine red stream slipping
down his shoe lace, swirling into the rainbow oil
in the big silver pan my father drove the car over”