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  • This story has a lot of potential, Raffi. Key elements that need addressing when you revise for Thursday’s final deadline.
  • Don’t write in the first person (“I”). Keep yourself out of the story.
  • Get some national information about fashion bloggers. You need a “nut graph,” which is a paragraph up high (say, no lower than the third paragraph) that puts the Austin blogging scene into some context. How many fashion bloggers are there? How have they upended the fashion magazine world? They now get front-row seats at the shows, right? They are the upstarts. The reader needs a sense of this. Do they make money blogging? How? Is it advertising on their sites?
  • Don’t use photos supplied by them. Take your own photos. You should be generating all of the content with your stories.