I applaud you for taking on a complex and important issue (I’m glad that your father has familiarity with this area and could be a good background guide). Well done, overall. I would tell the reader what the Insurance Retirement Institute is (it’s a trade group for the financial services industry. That’s fine, but you need to be very clear and transparent with your listeners about who your sources are. Don’t assume they know). I’m really glad that you got Johnson’s Social Security assault in the story. Keep going with audio. I think it’s a good medium for you! ARe you ok with HV running this in the spring?
Thanks so much… I felt comfortable doing this more so than fashion, which surprised me haha… Yes, now that I think about it, it probably would’ve been best to go into more detail about certain companies I mentioned. Yes, I saw that article like a couple days before I finished and I was like YES more stuff is happening while I am making this! It was really cool haha… I never thought sound would be my forte, but I really enjoyed it 🙂
Yes, I am totally okay with Hilltop Views running it!!
December 15, 2016 at 3:47 pm
I applaud you for taking on a complex and important issue (I’m glad that your father has familiarity with this area and could be a good background guide). Well done, overall. I would tell the reader what the Insurance Retirement Institute is (it’s a trade group for the financial services industry. That’s fine, but you need to be very clear and transparent with your listeners about who your sources are. Don’t assume they know). I’m really glad that you got Johnson’s Social Security assault in the story. Keep going with audio. I think it’s a good medium for you! ARe you ok with HV running this in the spring?
December 16, 2016 at 3:58 pm
Thanks so much… I felt comfortable doing this more so than fashion, which surprised me haha… Yes, now that I think about it, it probably would’ve been best to go into more detail about certain companies I mentioned. Yes, I saw that article like a couple days before I finished and I was like YES more stuff is happening while I am making this! It was really cool haha… I never thought sound would be my forte, but I really enjoyed it 🙂
Yes, I am totally okay with Hilltop Views running it!!