1. The goal of this project was to reflect a personal story of mine. The story was about how I felt I had to hide how I felt by putting on a mask.

2.  My mother tried to commit suicide by drowning and these photos represented that action.

1. The strongest part of these pictures I believe are the bubbles and how she is posed in the picture.  It gives the illusion that she was thrown in or is struggling and helpless, cannot escape her fate.

2. The weakest aspect would probably be the location because it does not connect directly with my story in any way.

3. The composition could be improved by moving her farther into the frame and moving the vingette so it is not as close to her body and more specifically her foot.

4. The project will change continually it will grow and change and when it changes it will become stronger.

5. The project could be strengthened technically by adding the photos of how I felt during this hard time.

6. I believe that with time my project will become stronger and will change into what it was meant to be from the start. I will hit obstacles but I will keep working on it and attacking it from different directions.