VISUAL STUDIES I: Sequence Critique #4

 

If my photos on pages (19 and 3 for example) were swapped, it would mess up the sequence and logic of my book. Along with the “life of a college student” sequence that I have going, I also have text that connects to the photos themselves on the previous page. So a lot would break down if I were to even swap a pair of my photos, and this helped me realize how important sequence is when making a book.

This prototype is a lot more complete than my previous ones. For starters, this one actually has all of the photos in it. Also, I edited some photos (pg 13 for example) in order to create a better story and make everything connect. Some of my fonts were different on specific pages, so I went ahead and made everything the same. I also swapped some pics around and played around with the sequence and found that some photos work in the sequence that I now have them in than previously.

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Also, unfortunately, the printers in Trustee were causing me and the majority of others problems such as the photo I have here of one of my pages. Towards the end, we couldn’t fix the mistake, so I just kept that page and I will fix it in the next book I make.


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