I am interested in the story, but I also want to know why praying so important to him, or anyone that prays 5 times a day. What is he praying for? Does he believe in it or is it just a custom?
Kelly, this is a graded critique of your classmate’s work. We need much more in the way of your thinking. More guidance and more detail. It’s great that you are addressing the overall focus of the story, but what about how Rosemond plans to produce the story? Ideas of video? Audio? Other multimedia elements. Need to put more muscle into the next critique.JH
October 6, 2016 at 2:48 pm
I am interested in the story, but I also want to know why praying so important to him, or anyone that prays 5 times a day. What is he praying for? Does he believe in it or is it just a custom?
Kelly, this is a graded critique of your classmate’s work. We need much more in the way of your thinking. More guidance and more detail. It’s great that you are addressing the overall focus of the story, but what about how Rosemond plans to produce the story? Ideas of video? Audio? Other multimedia elements. Need to put more muscle into the next critique.JH