— only 1 editing issue on pg. 9, kind of makes sense there but not supposed to be.
— Foldout came out nicely, I can possibly move the cutting on the inner page up by .10 of an inch bringing it closer to the spine.
—Still not too sure that the pic and graphic on pg. 3 makes sense
—The tree limbs show the changing of time and how sometimes we only remember fragmented. This is assisted with the fragmented edits.
—The two flashbacks are an example of the fragmented time. The first flashback shown was taken when we first got there while the interior flashback sequence is during our departure.
—I don’t feel the words match what I’m trying to get at. Things change, time moves, looking back only brings fragments of good times.
THINGS TO FINALIZE
—Switch photo on pg. 9 to right side of panorama
—Print on Matte sheets (figure out gatefold)
—Possibly change text